Friday 13 March 2020

The Rabbit Proof Fence


The Rabbit proof fence.
half caste child.
The rabbit proof is about three girls who were half caste and the police came to us ever day and then one day the police found them and took then away and it was there mission to get back home.


I've been running for days Escaping from More River, trying to finf my was home,
meeting bad people and good people, I felt scraerd, stressedand also sad because I can't find my way home, we stayed with lovely people they gave use food and water and a place to stay we left as soon as someone came into the room and started to run again.
We'er very tried and needing a place to stay to sleep but we refuse to just in case of Moore River came and snatch us so we ketp walking then we came across a river we left one of the bags on the river just to distract because we new that the tracker was following us when the tracker saw the bag he went to follow the bag going down stream while the tracker was doingthat we went up the river so we will have more time to escape so we started to run to get away Intill there leg were so tierd we all stop and sleept.
In the morning we got up and left whe we were heading off this man came to us he said "do you want to go to the fence '' we said ''yes'' the man saud '' go down to the train track down there and the next train comes that will be the train to catch ot the fence''
Dasiy said ''lets go down there so we can go home''
while Molly and Graice went the athoer way when Daisy was wating for the train to come we turned around to go and spy on Daisy but whenwe look up a head there was the car racing down as fast as possible and then this man came out of the and the tracker was there as well and they came racing for Daisy, got Dasiy a took off and we never saw Dasiy again after that we turn ariund and started to find our way hame it was so hot at miday we just.........collapse on the ground and sleept of several hours and when we woke up it was night after that we went to sleep till day when we got up we started to walk again and in the distance we saw people and a house and peole ruing to us and then we started to run and it was home and family we were so happy to see them and them to see us and someone said when is Dasiy we said '' the tracker and the learder took her and put her in a car and drove off.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Therese!
    I really enjoyed reading your story, it was very intense! I like how you have put deep thought into writing this; but next time you could re-read your work so you don't have as many errors, or get someone to buddy check. Apart from that...
    Ka Pai Therese!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Woah Therese, you did really well with this writing! keep up the great the work!

    ReplyDelete